Monday, January 21, 2013

Point of View

Darryl v.s Hutch

The book Big Field, there is a seen that Darryl and Hutch fight.  The book's point of view is in Hutch's and the Narrator's.  I will put the point of view in Darryl's.

"Put your glove down more," said Hutch's dad.

"Okay," I yell back.  There I was at the ball park with Hutch's dad.  I never know that Hutch's dad was so cool.  Ping I jumped into action.  I put my glove down and I felt the ball in my glove.  Hutch's dad was a lot of help with telling me how to field shortstop.

"One more ball," yelled Hutch's dad.

Ping I jumped; ball was rolling fast.  The glove was too high.  It rolled right under my legs.

Honk, honk.  Hey there are more kids thank for the help.  Hey Hutch.

"Why," he said?

Why what?

Hutch screamed, "Why were you playing ball with my dad"

"Hutch let me talk to you," said his dad.

When Hutch can back he was mad.  Your dad his pretty cool.  I wish I had a dad like that.

"Don't talk to me," he said

"Okay okay."

Later, "Hutch."

"What"

"Your dad is cool."

"I know," Hutch said.

"You are lucky. "

"No I am not," Hutch yelled.

"Okay Hutch Jr."

"What," Hutch yelled.

"Hutch Jr."

"That's it."

He throw his glove on the ground and stated to run.  He ran at me.  Bang I felt my head hit the ground.  Hutch's dad and the coach came running to us.

"Go," said Coach "you are suspended next game."

"What?" Hutch said.

"Yes you are suspended" coach screamed back.

Hutch walked off the field with his dad.  After the fight I hit and I hit a homer.  I fielded and I did what Hutch's dad taught me.

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