Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Patriots Pen Essay


Authors Note:
This piece is about the to tell the founding father good laws and bad laws in Patriots Pen.  I wrote this to demostrate my a essay





Back in Time to Founding Fathers



What I would like to say about America.  In the beginning the founding fathers made laws that were good and they should of made laws.  Now there are now laws that are good for everyone.

A law that the founding father made that was good was freedom of religion.  Now people can move here from a different country that believe in a different thing.  That is a good law because a lot of people will come to America.

Another good law is freedom of speech.  You can talk bad about a somebody famous.  You won’t get in trouble for talking bad about that person.  For example you can talk bad a president and you won’t get in trouble.  In other countries you could get in trouble.

Another good law is that we get to vote for our leader.  The leader can be voted in  by the people.  The president can be in office for 4 years and then they have to voted in again for 4 years.  If they don’t win the election another person wins and he or she is president.  Other country they have a leader for their whole life.  That isn’t right.

One law that the founding fathers should of made is women’s rights.  Women should have been able to vote a long time ago.  Now there is a law that women can vote.  Another thing should be is that there should be a law that women get the same amount of pay at a job as men.  They also want to work.  They couldn’t work in the 1800.

One law that the founding fathers should of did was that  African Americans would have the same rights.  One is that they should the they should be able to vote.  Another thing is that there shouldn’t have been segregation.  There shouldn’t have been slavery.  That wasn’t right that they were used to do work for free.  The master would make a lot a money, because the work was free they didn’t have to pay them.  All they have to do is that they had to pay to get them.

What I think is that the Founding Fathers made good laws and they needed to made more laws. But things happened because they didn’t know the future.

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